After a close run vote our inquiry question is:
“Is crying a good thing?”
Try to use some discussion connectives when considering your answer:
On the other hand
Many people would argue that . . .
The prompt is:
… but when she lifted the lid…
Your piece should be 106 words long and you must include the prompt as it is written. Please be careful when you link your work and make sure you put your first name, school and location not a title.
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1. in England they exported sugar, rum and wool
2. in west Africa they got slaves to trade in a America
3. the west Africans exported cloth, gunpowder, guns
4. in America the slaves got sold for tin, guns
5. then the pirates when back to England to get more sugar rum and wool
6.then they got more slaves in Africa
7. then they when to America to sell slaves
8. then that went on and on.
I was sitting in class (getting very bored) wondering what was in the miniture jar on top of the book shelf covered in a red cloth. Quickly, I went to investigate at lunch time but I am only small so I couldn’t reach but then PING! It multipied although the cloth was smaller. It happened again PING but this time you could see in side the jar! What was it? It looked like a squashed cactus with 83 tiny, evil eyes. Everyone piled into class and looked at me like I was an alien from Mercury. A little girl came forward but then she opened the lid!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Electrocity was now Microcity. It started when Luke Greenwood changed the world. Luke was clever – he liked homework and hated sports- he also hated Derek Reed, who ironically didn’t like to read. Derek forced Luke to do his homework (because he was too lazy to do it himself). One day, Luke decided he had had enough of Derek, so Luke created something to make him shrink! When the invention was finished, he pressed the little emerald-green button-which is what makes things shrink. He carefully positioned the laser, suddenly ZOOP! ZAM! ZIP! He had shrunk the whole city… Meetings were held across the country to find an answer. Who had shrunk Electrocity?
As a programmer, Tom got a lot of complaints. When he was competing for a place at a programing school, he was told that a programmer got a lot of complaints and made a kill box; but when she lifted the lid, it only whirred. The next day, she retired from the internet. That was actually a lie, or an untruth, as Tom used to to call them. Tom thought back to his first game. It was not published and was on scratch, but he remembered it well. He had over 100,posts at the present time!!! That was his proudest moment in his life so far.
When i opened the jar this green gloppy slime came out then it tried to jump on to me but i go out the slimes way. So i ran up staris but the green slime thing ! went into the bath room and it got bigger and bigger so i opened the window quicly and quiet the i jumed out the window still alive i ran for my life but he had a power. To throw bombs i ran to the police staison to get the police but thay did not lisen to my axsques but it was only my brothers
Gently the large,graceful bird flew through the dark, purple night the stars shimmered over head cats prowled the alley way and dogs howled in the wet gardens bellow, the bird still flew on. Her mission was the most important mission of a life time she needed that box it was very important.slowly flying over many different countries even ones far, far from home but she carried on nothing could stop her now not even a big incredible hulk charging then flying it probably would amaze her though!!!
She saw it the small,gold, magical box shinning there she swooped lower and lower but when she lifted the lid…
Lucy was so bored lying on her bed she was going to take the recycling out but she forgot about until she heard “LUCY get down here now!”
“Coming mum,” cried Lucy as she stomped down the stairs to take out the recycling but when she lifted the lid she got sucked into a terrible vortecs!!! which she landed in a big bowel of sweets!
Lucy was so excited that she swam in the sweets and started to eat the sweets! She also met someone named MR wink he was great and he could also jump at great heights such as a 100000000000000m! “you are great MR wink!”
“Thankyou,” replied Mr wink
Carefully I opened the door. Gently the creaky door opened and I stared inside. Slowly I stepped inside and the dusty, brown floorboards made a noise. I froze. All of a sudden I heard a noise coming towards me. Charging towards me was a sheet, at first I thought it was a ghost however when it came closer it shot past me so I couldn’t make it out. Just then all I could hear was my breath breathing cold air out. Nothing could stop me now. I moved a little more but whenever I tried the floorboards creaked. What would I do? So I lifted the lid.
I stood at the door shaking I had just opened the hollow door. Suddenly I felt the vibration the floor was shaking I looked up to see they biscuit tin shaking. With in a flash a felt a chill run down the back of my spine. Cautiously step by step I walked towards the tin, the floor boards began to creek letting out an ear splitting sound. Shivering I felt my heart pounding, not because of what I may of found in the tin I left the door open it was freezing. But when I lifted the lid suddenly I screamed ……….
I was driving my car to the airport, to get on a Boeing 747sp plane as a pilot to
fly the passengers from Manchester airport to Domodedovo airport. Domodedovo is
an airport in Moscow, Russia .When I got on the plane; the co-pilot gave me a
box with something secret inside it. When I flew to Domodedovo I stopped in a
luxury hotel. The hotel was awesome and I was very impressed with it, everything
was so beautiful. Later I went for a walk around the hotel, which was like
shining. I came back and saw a lady but when she lifted the lid it shined.
Once upon a time there was a little boy named James. He lived in a small cottage in dreamland, His dream was to be king of Fairyland and rule the Globe. He looks up to his dad that was former leader of fairyland. One day in the woods a magic Dolphin flew ever so quickly out of the sky and then PHEW!!!!!!!!!!!! Fairyland was destroyed but it was up to James to save it or it will be history. Just then James discovered Bad Fairy’s weakness so he went up in the sky killed Bad Fairys servants and went up to the sky to beat him