100 word challenge

One steeming night I dicided to go for a walk . Just then a fox ran ahed of me . Suddenly I wanted to go home I heard  the howling of the wolves … and then I saw a bright light… I went to investegate . Here standing in front of me were a family of fire flys . The fire flys were somehow magical,like lantens in the sky . I went home I was feeling verry tired the bed was feeling hot suddenly the bed lifted it was flying. “Wow”I said as I zoomed up in the chilly and fresh air.

2 Responses to “100 word challenge”

  1. Debbie (team 100WC)September 22, 2013 at 5:14 pm #

    Well done on your entry Hannah. I liked the spooky theme of the piece and thought the howling wolves and steaming night added to the mental picture I was forming. Next time have a quick read through and check for typos and spelling. Well done again.

  2. Shannon Cotsford Junior SchoolOctober 3, 2013 at 1:29 pm #

    Your 100WC is great!!!!!!!! I like your use of adjectives!

    BYE FOR NOW SHANNON

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