The Dimensional Window…

I legged it! Pete, my next door neighbour shouted “Oi Get back ‘ere with my rake!”,  “You will never get away with this!” He yelled.

“Oh yeah?! Well I just did!” I ran away, towards the house. Mum and dad were out, but Sam was in, my big bro! I always mucked about with him! I banged on the window of the house, ZIPPPPP! A vortex in the darkened window gleamed out and pulled me in! AUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!” As I stepped through, everything was black except the window behind me. Like a dimensional door, but a window?!?! There were more windows around me, leading to other mystical places, this was only the beginning…..!

3 Responses to “The Dimensional Window…”

  1. A GilbertJanuary 21, 2014 at 2:58 pm #

    What a great entry! You have used lots of different types of punctuation which has made the story very exciting! I liked your use of a cliff hanger – I want to know what happened through the other windows!

  2. EleanorJanuary 24, 2014 at 1:05 pm #

    that is better than any of mine … almost

  3. louieFebruary 1, 2014 at 3:42 pm #

    this is great buster it really excites
    me

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