my 100 word challenge

Mary was bored. All she could do now was wait. Mary thought waiting was the most boring thing in the world. Mary was 10 years old and had a cat called kit-cat who she got when she was 8.mary was waiting for her uncle bobber to come .Marys favourite game was hide and seek and it was kit-cats too. So Mary counted as kit-cat padded  off. 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10 “coming, ready or not here I come” shouted Mary as she ran off to find her best buddy. He usually hid in her dirty clothes  basket but when she lifted the lid all it was her dirty, used   clothes.

2 Responses to “my 100 word challenge”

  1. Mr Kilcoyne (Team 100 WC)March 15, 2014 at 3:03 pm #

    Hi Aoife,
    Well done on your entry to this week’s 100 WC.
    I really liked the way that you have started this story. Quite unusual.
    I also loved the idea of playing hide and seek with a cat! You’ve really planned how to use the prompt well.
    Next time, think about how you can start your sentences in interesting ways, e.g., the 3rd sentence could start, “Waiting was one of Mary’s most boring activities!”.
    Keep up the excellent blogging!
    Mr Kilcoyne
    Team 100 WC
    London
    UK

  2. anaoMarch 16, 2014 at 12:11 pm #

    Your 100wc was amazing and I like the sound of uncle Bobber!

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