One gleaming, starry night, Issac and Toby were crawling though the hedge of the back yard! “Yeow!” yelled Toby as a thorn pricked his leg. “OW!” screeched Isscac as a thistle prodded into his arm. Silently they carryed on crawling, their dad came out, he was called Richard and boy, he was M-A-D! Those boys were in real trouble now!


The next thing thing they know is that a powerful stench of gunpower hit the back of their noses! “Has dad got some sort of new mega balistic rocket launcher!”

“Erm….. no,

…Hey wait! Look up, can you see the what I can see?!?!”

4 Responses to “Fireworks”

  1. Mr BoneMarch 17, 2014 at 9:36 pm #

    A super piece of writing Alexander. You have really written with your authors voice and put your personality into the writing, keep up the good work!

  2. KaiMarch 21, 2014 at 1:05 pm #

    cool story buster

  3. amariMarch 21, 2014 at 1:06 pm #

    amazing story!

  4. andreApril 25, 2014 at 1:29 pm #

    Cool work alex!

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