my 100wc by kai

and when I opened the cupboard door a timemachine was there it came out of the magic cupbord.So i ran up the staris to grab my bag and jumped into the time machine and i was in the dinosur time then i ran for my life.Then i came a cross a cave and i set up shelter there and slept the night then there was the sound of a volcano erupting so there was a good chanes of me dieing so i ran for the time machine and whent back home but when i got home my house was flying and my borther was falling thorw the sky!!!!! the end

2 Responses to “my 100wc by kai”

  1. Mr BoneMay 21, 2014 at 9:09 am #

    Well done Kai, a super piece of writing. I really like how strange and intriguing your story is. Maybe next time you could try to use an -ly opener? Keep up the good work Kai!

    Mr Bone

  2. precieuseJune 6, 2014 at 10:25 pm #

    What do you mean the end!!! Kai that piece of writing saw awesome! If you keep using I.S.P.A.C.E then you would be much more awesomER. (That doesn’t make any sense).

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