The French Boat!

The beautiful sea crashed against the edges of the Columbia, a steamliner, that I am on board.  I am also English but I am in France on my way home from the ferry port. The captain was yelling at people because we were stranded in the middle of the Sea with one life boat, I had no idea that had run out of fuel. Some of the words he was saying sounded like a foreign language that wasn’t even French!.

While he was yelling at us we decided that a few of us would try to get help using the life boat, and so we sailed off. Suddenly the ship started sinking rapidly! This was bad!

 

2 Responses to “The French Boat!”

  1. Mr BoneMay 21, 2014 at 9:07 am #

    Well done Alexander, this is a fantastic piece of writing and I enjoyed reading it lots. You have used a good range of sentence openers, maybe next time you could include a simile or metaphor to describe the sea? Keep up the super writing!

    Mr Bone

  2. precieuseJune 6, 2014 at 10:19 pm #

    Hi there Alexander. I really enjoyed the piece of writing that you wrote. I am looking forward to want you are going to be able to write next.

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